Make a sentence using the words below: 1. swim across 2. cancelled 3. professional 4. mysterious 5.

2020-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I had a swimming competition. It was about swimming across the pool. But it was cancelled because the weather was not good. So I just studied from professional teacher about the mysterious happening.

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Hello there, [이름]!

Welcome to the last week of the month and thank you for always sending your homework. Much appreciated!

Cheers,
Jean~~


I had a swimming competition.
>> or: I joined a swimming competition. 

 It was about swimming across the pool. 
>> or: We had to swim across the pool. 

But it was cancelled because the weather was not good. 
>> or: However, it was cancelled due to the bad weather. 

So I just studied from professional teacher about the mysterious happening.
>> So I just studied from a professional teacher about the mysterious happening.

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