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* I am acquainted with profssor Mr. [Name]. I know his routine route for work. Regarding his rumor, it is speculation. He is a very honest person.
Could you check it?
It is my pleasure to contact you. My name is [Name] Kyoung Hee and I am in charge of international relations for COMWEL(Korea Workers' Compensation & Welfare Service) as replacement for Mr. [Name]. As far as I know, your organization is the member of European Forum and Mrs. [Name] said you are very active and help me arrange COMWEL visit to CNAMTS. We would like to request for the acceptance of our visit to your agency on 17 November. (The schedule might be flexible)
In 2012, our delegation visited your institution and it was valuable time to know. Especially Centre Beauvoir located in Evry was very impressive. Thus, we want to keep good relations with CNAMTS and learn your advanced expertise.
COMWEL is known for East Asia’s leading social insurance company and we established Asian Workers Compensation
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Hi Miss [이름]!
Happy Thursday :)
Have a great day ahead and see you later :)
I am acquainted with profssor Mr. [Name].
>>I am acquainted with professor Kim.
I know his routine route for work.
>> CORRECT
Regarding his rumor, it is speculation.
>> Regarding his rumor, it is a speculation.
He is a very honest person.
>> CORRECT
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**Better if you put \"Greetings!\"
It is my pleasure to contact you. My name is [Name] Kyoung Hee and I am in charge of international relations for COMWEL(Korea Workers\' Compensation & Welfare Service) as replacement for Mr. [Name].
>> CORRECT
As far as I know, your organization is the member of European Forum and Mrs. [Name] said you are very active and help me arrange COMWEL visit to CNAMTS.
>>As far as I know, your organization is a member of European Forum, and Mrs. [Name] said you are very active and you can help me arrange COMWEL to visit in CNAMTS.
We would like to request for the acceptance of our visit to your agency on 17 November. (The schedule might be flexible)
>> CORRECT
In 2012, our delegation visited your institution and it was valuable time to know. Especially Centre Beauvoir located in Evry was very impressive. Thus, we want to keep good relations with CNAMTS and learn your advanced expertise.
>>In 2012, our delegation visited your institution and it was very valuable to us, especially Centre Beauvoir which is located in Evry was very impressive. Thus, we want to keep this good relations with CNAMTS and learn more about your advanced expertise.
COMWEL is known for East Asia’s leading social insurance company and we established Asian Workers Compensation
>>COMWEL is known in East Asia
Happy Thursday :)
Have a great day ahead and see you later :)
I am acquainted with profssor Mr. [Name].
>>I am acquainted with professor Kim.
I know his routine route for work.
>> CORRECT
Regarding his rumor, it is speculation.
>> Regarding his rumor, it is a speculation.
He is a very honest person.
>> CORRECT
=====================================
**Better if you put \"Greetings!\"
It is my pleasure to contact you. My name is [Name] Kyoung Hee and I am in charge of international relations for COMWEL(Korea Workers\' Compensation & Welfare Service) as replacement for Mr. [Name].
>> CORRECT
As far as I know, your organization is the member of European Forum and Mrs. [Name] said you are very active and help me arrange COMWEL visit to CNAMTS.
>>As far as I know, your organization is a member of European Forum, and Mrs. [Name] said you are very active and you can help me arrange COMWEL to visit in CNAMTS.
We would like to request for the acceptance of our visit to your agency on 17 November. (The schedule might be flexible)
>> CORRECT
In 2012, our delegation visited your institution and it was valuable time to know. Especially Centre Beauvoir located in Evry was very impressive. Thus, we want to keep good relations with CNAMTS and learn your advanced expertise.
>>In 2012, our delegation visited your institution and it was very valuable to us, especially Centre Beauvoir which is located in Evry was very impressive. Thus, we want to keep this good relations with CNAMTS and learn more about your advanced expertise.
COMWEL is known for East Asia’s leading social insurance company and we established Asian Workers Compensation
>>COMWEL is known in East Asia
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