Make a short essay about your childhood.

I am the first daughter in my whole family. Grandparents and all of relatives are really loved me. Especially my grandmother raised me up because my mother had to work. I remember that my grandmother’s delicious foods and warm hugs. These days, my grandparents are living in same building with my family. They are living in second floor, and I’m living in fourth floor. Sometimes we share a dinner together.

Good Morning!

Wow! You have an adorable family. You are very lucky to have a good grandmother and I am happy to know that you are living in the same building.

Take care of them and I hope that you will always have time for your family. See you!

T. Anne

I am the first daughter in my whole family.

>>I am the first daughter in my family.

>>OR: I am the first daughter of my entire family.

Grandparents and all of relatives are really loved me.

>>My grandparents and relatives really love me.

Especially my grandmother raised me up because my mother had to work.

>> My grandmother raised me because my mother had to work

I remember that my grandmother’s delicious foods and warm hugs.

>> I can still remember my grandmother\'s delicious food and warm hugs.

These days, my grandparents are living in same building with my family.

>>Correct!

They are living in second floor, and I’m living in fourth floor.

>>They are living in the second floor while I live in the fourth floor.

Sometimes we share a dinner together.

>>Sometimes, we have dinner together.