Make a short poem about your life.(Give at least 2 stanzas.)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
This gave me goose bumps!
It\'s so good! ^^
Thank you for inspiring and motivating me to keep doing better.
I never would have thought that any of my students would have the same sentiment towards me as I do to them.
I will always be grateful for your existence. ^^
~~t. Ally
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As my game is a relay, so I collaborate with other athletes.
>> CORRECT!
As long as my predecessor did his best, I will not criticize him with his record.
>> As long as my predecessor does his best, I will not criticize him with his records.
Once I take over the batton, everything will be on me.
>> Once I take over the baton, everything will be up to me.
I run and run with my heart being likely to pop, in order not to become another bad predecessor to my successor.
>> CORRECT!
My life is one link of a chain.
>> CORRECT!
Generation after generation, we hand over and take over.
>> CORRECT!
Even though I took over less, I will hand over a lot.
>> CORRECT! (This is my favorite line)
A strong chain begins with a strong link.
>> CORRECT!
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