Make a short story using the words below:
학생이 쓴 원문
<Story Time>
Sally,Andy,Katie,Jack went to the "Talking about topic"academy."Hello."said everone."Good afternoon"said Ms.Lee."Today we are going to talking about people."said Ms.Lee."Jack do you know about Neymar time line?"asked Ms.Lee."Who is Neymar?"asked Jack."He is a famous soccer player."said the teacher."Teacher according to the research Nolan's way is very good.He grows the food too."said Katie."Your right.Nolan is a movie director."said teacher."Do you know about Mozart?"asked teacher."Yes.He is a famous composer but he passed a way early."said Sally."Correct."said teacher."I hate see a pantomime."said Andy."Me too."said Sally."I want to be a comedian.I think it is interesting job."said Andy. "I think you will be a good comedian.Because you always make evereone funny."said Jack."Thanks."said Andy."Katie do you know the actor do?"asked Ms.Lee.
"The actor act the film."said Katie."Do you like motion picture?"asked Andy. "Yes,it is my hobby."said Jack.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
GOOD JOB!
You never failed to immpress me.
This homework is great.
Your imagination is really good!
I know you are will become a successful director someday.
Keep on working for your dream my dear!
Just be mindful with some your grammar mistakes today.
It was just minimal but I know you can do better.
Have time to review this.
See you later my dear!
Teacher Liza
<Story Time>Sally,Andy,Katie,Jack went to the \"Talking about topic\"academy.
>> Sally, Andy, Katie and Jack went to the academy talking about a topic.
\"Hello.\"said everone.
>> \"Hello.\"said everyone.
\"Good afternoon\"said Ms.Lee.
>> Correct
\"Today we are going to talking about people.\"said Ms.Lee.
>>\"Today we are going to talk about people.\"said Ms.Lee.
\"Jack do you know about Neymar time line?\"asked Ms.Lee.
>>\"Jack do you know about Neymar\'s time line?\"asked Ms.Lee.
\"Who is Neymar?\"asked Jack.
>>Correct
\"He is a famous soccer player.\"said the teacher.
>>Correct
\"Teacher according to the research Nolan\'s way is very good.
>>Correct
He grows the food too.\"said Katie.\"Your right.Nolan is a movie director.\"said teacher.
>>Correct
\"Do you know about Mozart?\"asked teacher.
>>Correct
\"Yes.He is a famous composer but he passed a way early.\"said Sally.
>>\"Yes. He is a famous composer but he passed away early.\"said Sally.
\"Correct.\"said teacher.
>>\"Correct.\"said the teacher.
\"I hate see a pantomime.\"said Andy.
>> \"I hate seeing a pantomime.\"said Andy.
\"Me too.\"said Sally.>> Correct
\"I want to be a comedian.I think it is interesting job.\"said Andy.
>> \"I want to be a comedian. I think it is an interesting job.\"said Andy.
\"I think you will be a good comedian.Because you always make evereone funny.\"said Jack.
>>\"I think you will be a good comedian. Because you always make evereone laugh.\"said Jack.
\"Thanks.\" said Andy.>> Correct
\"Katie do you know the actor do?\"asked Ms.Lee.
>>\"Katie do you know what actor do?\"asked Ms.Lee.\"The actor act the film.\"said Katie.>> \"An actor acts in the film.\"said Katie.
\"Do you like motion picture?\"asked Andy. \"Yes,it is my hobby.\"said Jack. >> \"Do you like watching motion picture?\"asked Andy. \"Yes,it is my hobby.\"said Jack.
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