Make/compose two sentences using the verb \'PLAY\' and two sentences using the noun \'PLAY\'.
학생이 쓴 원문
I was playing with my friends in the street outside in the evening.
Along the street, some group of musicians were playing the violins and cellos.
My friends and I were really into the soccer play at that times.
The setting sun cast an orange glow on the street, and our play was lively like the beautiful play of the musicians.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon!
(^_^)
How are you doing, Sue!
Your sentences are long and sometimes, the context isn\'t that clear.
In your 4th sentence, the play referred to acting performance. Am I right?
We can talk about this in class if you want to.
See you then!
__Teacher Mayleen :)
I was playing with my friends in the street outside in the evening.
>>> I was playing with my friends on the street in the evening.
Along the street, some group of musicians were playing the violins and cellos.
Along the street, some group of musicians were playing the violins and cellos.
>>> CORRECT
My friends and I were really into the soccer play at that times.
My friends and I were really into the soccer play at that times.
>>> My friends and I were really into the soccer play at that time.
The setting sun cast an orange glow on the street, and our play was lively like the beautiful play of the musicians.
The setting sun cast an orange glow on the street, and our play was lively like the beautiful play of the musicians.
>>> The setting sun cast an orange glow on the street and our play looked as lively as the beautiful play of musicians.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.