Make cookie and puddig.
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On Sunday, we made pudding. First we do make caramel sauce. Second we made pudding and waiting in fridge 6 hours. And then
done!It was a So so great!! So sweet, so squish. So I love it!We made two so my little sister and I don`t have to share.I made cookie
too. I made shape like water melon, straw berry pop cone, mushroom and other shapes funny. It taste really good I love cookies and
puddings.
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Enjoy your the night! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
On Sunday, we made pudding.
>> CORRECT!
First we do make caramel sauce.
>> First we made the caramel sauce.
Second we made pudding and waiting in fridge 6 hours.
>> Next, we made the pudding and put it in the fridge for 6 hours.
And then
done!
>> And it was finally ready.
It was a So so great!!
>> It tastes so great!
So sweet, so squish.
>> It was so sweet and squishy.
So I love it!
>> CORRECT!
We made two so my little sister and I don`t have to share.
>> We made two, so my little sister and I don\'t have to share.
I made cookie
too.
>> I made some cookies too.
I made shape like water melon, straw berry pop cone, mushroom and other shapes funny.
>> I made shapes like watermelon, strawberry, pop cone, mushroom, and other fun shapes.
It taste really good I love cookies and
puddings.
>> It tastes really good. I love the cookies and puddings that we made.
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