Make my passion fired again
학생이 쓴 원문
So far, I have been busy so much because I got married these days. To help successfuly my marriage, my institute team members excluded or reduced my portion in the team project. So I need to pay back againt their mercy so that I work hard even though still I cannot stay overnight or late for working. Also due to the change of my lifestyle, I have had difficult time to get used to it. But now my wife and I started to understand each other during the last few months. I think that I can do my best and put more my effort even in satisfying my wife. WIth having focus on learning Eglish, I started excizing for my health. I hope that my trials can aid my regeneration.
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I do appreciate it. I'm happy that you showed interest to write
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life. I wish you good luck!
So far, I have been busy so much because I got married these days.
>>So far, I've been busy lately because i just got married afew months ago.
To help successfuly my marriage, my institute team members excluded or reduced my portion in the team project.
>>To make my marriage successful, my institute team members minimized some of my responsibilty on our the team's project.
So I need to pay back againt their mercy so that I work hard even though still I cannot stay overnight or late for working.
>>I asked for their understanding so I would not stay overnight or do overtime.
Also due to the change of my lifestyle, I have had difficult time to get used to it.
>>And also, because of my change of lifestyle, I'm having a hard time get adjusted and get used to it.
But now my wife and I started to understand each other during the last few months.
>>My wife and I are trying to understand each other these past few months.
I think that I can do my best and put more my effort even in satisfying my wife.
>>I think I can do my best and exert more effort to satisfy and make my wife happy.
WIth having focus on learning Eglish, I started excizing for my health.
>>I focus myself in studying Englsih.
>>I started doing some exercise for my health too.
I hope that my trials can aid my regeneration.
>>I hope my endeavors will aid my regeneration.
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