Make my passion fired again

2010-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

So far, I have been busy so much because I got married these days. To help successfuly my marriage, my institute team members excluded or reduced my portion in the team project. So I need to pay back againt their mercy so that I work hard even though still I cannot stay overnight or late for working. Also due to the change of my lifestyle, I have had difficult time to get used to it. But now my wife and I started to understand each other during the last few months. I think that I can do my best and put more my effort even in satisfying my wife. WIth having focus on learning Eglish, I started excizing for my health. I hope that my trials can aid my regeneration.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. It's nice of you to send this letter thorugh the company's website. I do appreciate it. I'm happy that you showed interest to write on this page and express on what you feel on the new phase of your life. I wish you good luck!   So far, I have been busy so much because I got married these days. >>So far, I've been busy lately because i just got married afew months ago. To help successfuly my marriage, my institute team members excluded or reduced my portion in the team project. >>To make my marriage successful, my institute team members minimized some of my responsibilty on our the team's project.  So I need to pay back againt their mercy so that I work hard even though still I cannot stay overnight or late for working. >>I asked for their understanding so I would not stay overnight or do overtime.  Also due to the change of my lifestyle, I have had difficult time to get used to it. >>And also, because of my change of lifestyle, I'm having a hard time get adjusted and get used to it.  But now my wife and I started to understand each other during the last few months. >>My wife and I are trying to understand each other these past few months. I think that I can do my best and put more my effort even in satisfying my wife. >>I think I can do my best and exert more effort to satisfy and make my wife happy. WIth having focus on learning Eglish, I started excizing for my health. >>I focus myself in studying Englsih. >>I started doing some exercise for my health too. I hope that my trials can aid my regeneration. >>I hope my endeavors will aid my regeneration. 

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