Make or compose five (5) sentences using the word \'LIGHT\'. You can use it as noun, verb, or adject

2020-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Every colors of world depends on light. A butterfly is lighting on the flower. The bunch of potatoes was 7 kilos lighter compare to my order. We will leave this Hotel in the morning when the time it\'s light. I made my bag lighter to move easier.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Sue!
(^_^)//
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
I tried my best to simplify/modify your sentences without changing the context.
I will see you in class tomorrow. Have a good night!

__Teacher Mayleen :)


Every colors of world depends on light.
>>> Every color in this world depends on light.
A butterfly is lighting on the flower.
>>> The butterfly is illuminating the light coming from the flower.
The bunch of potatoes was 7 kilos lighter compare to my order.
>>> The bunch of potatoes was 7 kilos lighter compared to my order.
We will leave this Hotel in the morning when the time it\'s light.
>>> We will leave this hotel in the twilight.
I made my bag lighter to move easier.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I made my bag lighter so I can move easily.
>>> OR: I made my bag lighter so it\'s easier to move.

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