Make sentences in a creative way
학생이 쓴 원문
1. temperature : In the winter, by bundling up, we can raise our body temperature.
2. catastrophe : The novel, Rome and Juliet ended up a catastrophe, killing themselves because of a mi[이름]derstanding.
3. avert : When I see a horrible or terrible scene in front of me, I try to avert my eyes.
4. mitigate : To mitigate the pain, I put an ice pack on my wrist.
5. change : To change the direction, I drove the car to the
강사 첨삭
Great job, [이름]! You were able to create amazing sentences in this homework. I liked the topics you\'ve talked about they were informative but creative at the same time. Here are my corrections, please take note of them. Have a great day ahead!
- Teacher Raven
>> In winter, bundling up can warm up our body temperature.
2. catastrophe : The novel, Rome and Juliet ended up a catastrophe, killing themselves because of a mi[이름]derstanding.
2. catastrophe : The novel, Rome and Juliet ended up a catastrophe, killing themselves because of a mi[이름]derstanding.
>> The novel Romeo and Juliet ended up in a catastrophe. The characters killed themselves because of a mi[이름]derstanding.
3. avert : When I see a horrible or terrible scene in front of me, I try to avert my eyes.
3. avert : When I see a horrible or terrible scene in front of me, I try to avert my eyes.
>> Correct.
4. mitigate : To mitigate the pain, I put an ice pack on my wrist.
4. mitigate : To mitigate the pain, I put an ice pack on my wrist.
>> Correct.
5. change : To change the direction, I drove the car to the
5. change : To change the direction, I drove the car to the
>> To change directions, I drove my car to the right.
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