Make up
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when I was in highschool, I thought that wearing make-up a lot is definitely not good for my skin. because cosmetic make my skin not to breathe. but now I have c[이름]ged my mind. I think people who likes doing make up take care of their skin more and they have more interest of skincare product t[이름] the people who do not make up well.
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Hi, [이름] [이름]!
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I really appreciate it!
Please continue writing your homework for faster improvements. :)
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-T.NIKKI ^^
when I was in highschool, I thought that wearing make-up a lot is definitely not good for my skin. because cosmetic make my skin not to breathe.
>> When I was in high school, I thought that wearing make-up a lot was definitely not good for my skin because cosmetic products can make my skin unable to breathe.
but now I have c[이름]ged my mind.
>> However, now, I have c[이름]ged my mind.
I think people who likes doing make up take care of their skin more and they have more interest of skincare product t[이름] the people who do not make up well.
>> I think people who like doing make-up take good care of their skin more and they have more interest in skincare products t[이름] the people who do not do make-up well.
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