Making a plan
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, sir [이름]! ^.^
Happy Friday!
It\'s good to hear from you
How are you doing?
It\'s good to hear that you are going to have a 2 days off from work.
At least you could have the time to relax. :)
I hope you enjoy your weekend then.
See you in class! ^^,
Enjoy the rest of your day and have a wonderful weekend! ^^,
--- Teacher Jacey :)
I\'m going to have holidays for 2 days from Saturday to Sunday in this weekend. since it\'s the happy new year days.
>> Since it\'s the New Year, I\'m going to have a two days vacation which is on Saturday and Sunday.
It\'s Third time to have holidays for 2 days.
>> It\'s my third time to have a holiday for 2 days.
I have been had a holiday in a week since I began to work here in Barakah .
>> I haven\'t been on a holiday for a week since I began working here in Barakah.
I arrived here last 21 March after finished the project for the inspection Kori#4 RV mach UT.
>> I arrived here last March 21 after I finished a project for the inspection of Kori#4 RV Mach UT.
I\'m going to drink bear with my co-worker after finish work tomorrow.
>> I\'m going to drink beer with my coworker after I finish my work tomorrow.
I love to drink bear but I can\'t it for 3 month from 10 October when I left Korea.
>> I love drinking but I haven\'t drank beer for the past 3 months.
>> OR : I love drinking but I haven\'t drank beer ever since I left Korea.
I tried to go Dubai to buy some pressure for my family on Saturday but I couldn\'t because my friend have to work.
>> I was planning to go to Dubai to buy some presents for my family on Saturday but I couldn\'t because my friend has to go to work.
He is the only one person that I know who has a car around me.
>> He is the only person I know who has a car around here.
His name is Jami, he is the Pakystani.
>> His name is Jami, a Pakistani.
>> OR : My friend\'s name is Jami, who is a Pakistani.
I was let down when I heard his answer, when I asked him \"Would you drive for me on Saturday?\" he said to me \" Sorry I have to work\" so I changed my plan to visit Silla.
>> I was let down when I heard his answer. I asked him if he could drive me on Saturday but he said he had to go to work. So I changed my mind and planned to go to Silla instead.
>> OR : I felt bad when I got his answer. I asked him if he could drive me on Saturday but he said he had to go to work. So I changed my mind and planned to go to Silla instead.
Silla is the village next to the Barakah.
>> Silla is a village next to Barakah.
It\'s far 30 minutes driving a car from here.
>> It usually takes 30 minutes by car to get there.
>> OR : It\'s far because it will take 30 minutes to get there.
I\'m going to take a public bus.
>> Correct
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