Making a plan

2016-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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I'm going to have holidays for 2 days from Saturday to Sunday in this weekend. since it's the happy new year days. It's Third time to have holidays for 2 days. I have been had a holiday in a week since I began to work here in Barakah .I arrived here last 21 March after finished the project for the inspection Kori#4 RV mach UT. I'm going to drink bear with my co-worker after finish work tomorrow. I love to drink bear but I can't it for 3 month from 10 October when I left Korea. I tried to go Dubai to buy some pressure for my family on Saturday but I couldn't because my friend have to work. He is the only one person that I know who has a car around me. His name is Jami, he is the Pakystani. I was let down when I heard his answer, when I asked him "Would you drive for me on Saturday?" he said to me " Sorry I have to work" so I changed my plan to visit Silla. Silla is the village next to the Barakah. It's far 30 minutes driving a car from here. I'm going to take a public bus.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, sir [이름]! ^.^


Happy Friday!

It\'s good to hear from you

How are you doing?


It\'s good to hear that you are going to have a 2 days off from work.

At least you could have the time to relax. :)

I hope you enjoy your weekend then.

See you in class! ^^,


Enjoy the rest of your day and have a wonderful weekend! ^^,


--- Teacher Jacey :)



I\'m going to have holidays for 2 days from Saturday to Sunday in this weekend. since it\'s the happy new year days.

>> Since it\'s the New Year, I\'m going to have a two days vacation which is on Saturday and Sunday.


It\'s Third time to have holidays for 2 days.

>> It\'s my third time to have a holiday for 2 days.


I have been had a holiday in a week since I began to work here in Barakah .

>> I haven\'t been on a holiday for a week since I began working here in Barakah.


I arrived here last 21 March after finished the project for the inspection Kori#4 RV mach UT.

>> I arrived here last March 21 after I finished a project for the inspection of Kori#4 RV Mach UT.


I\'m going to drink bear with my co-worker after finish work tomorrow.

>> I\'m going to drink beer with my coworker after I finish my work tomorrow.


I love to drink bear but I can\'t it for 3 month from 10 October when I left Korea.

>> I love drinking but I haven\'t drank beer for the past 3 months.

>> OR : I love drinking but I haven\'t drank beer ever since I left Korea.


I tried to go Dubai to buy some pressure for my family on Saturday but I couldn\'t because my friend have to work.

>> I was planning to go to Dubai to buy some presents for my family on Saturday but I couldn\'t because my friend has to go to work.


He is the only one person that I know who has a car around me.

>> He is the only person I know who has a car around here.


His name is Jami, he is the Pakystani.

>> His name is Jami, a Pakistani.

>> OR : My friend\'s name is Jami, who is a Pakistani.


I was let down when I heard his answer, when I asked him \"Would you drive for me on Saturday?\" he said to me \" Sorry I have to work\" so I changed my plan to visit Silla.

>> I was let down when I heard his answer. I asked him if he could drive me on Saturday but he said he had to go to work. So I changed my mind and planned to go to Silla instead.

>> OR : I felt bad when I got his answer. I asked him if he could drive me on Saturday but he said he had to go to work. So I changed my mind and planned to go to Silla instead.


Silla is the village next to the Barakah.

>> Silla is a village next to Barakah.


It\'s far 30 minutes driving a car from here.

>> It usually takes 30 minutes by car to get there.

>> OR : It\'s far because it will take 30 minutes to get there.


I\'m going to take a public bus.

>> Correct


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