Making a shelf by myself.
학생이 쓴 원문
Tomorrow, I'm going to make a shelf which is made of wood by myself.
Well...... I'm really excited to make my own shelf.
Also, I am going to use a hammer that children's tool.
I hope it will come out good shelf.
I really can't wait for tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Wow! I wish I could see a picture of your art work! As you make your own shelf, remember to be very patient with it and be very careful with the measurements. The measurements are the most important things for carpentry. Be sure to make it good on your first try. Godspeed!-Teacher JM
Tomorrow, I'm going to make a shelf which is made of wood by myself.
>>>Tomorrow, I'm going to make a wooden shelf by myself.Well...... I'm really excited to make my own shelf.
>>>CorrectAlso, I am going to use a hammer that children's tool.
>>>Also, I am going to use a children's hammer tool. I hope it will come out good shelf.
>>>I hope that it will come out to be good shelf.I really can't wait for tomorrow.
>>>Correct
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