making me busy during weekend.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. my dad is farming.
so, i help to my father.
2. I need to rest
3. I have to study engilsh .
i have to write self introduction
강사 첨삭
Hello Laura! Thank you for your effort in doing your homework. I really appreciate it. Please take note of the sentence corrections and suggestions I have made. See you in our class! Have a good day!
1. my dad is farming.
>>> CORRECT!
>>> My dad has a farm.
so, i help to my father.
>>> So I help my father.
>>> OR So I help him there.
2. I need to rest
>>> CORRECT!
>>> OR I need to have some rest.
3. I have to study engilsh .
>>> CORRECT!
i have to write self introduction
>>> I have to write my self-introduction.
_TEACHER MICHELLE_
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