Making me happy
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Catherine! You are such an amazing mom and wife. Your love for your family is priceless, you\'re awesome! What you wrote here touched my heart. You did great in expressing yourself. I do agree with what you told me the last time, you\'re really good at written English. Now all we have to work on is your speaking skills. You can do this! ~ Teacher Elisha
I am happy when I am with my family.
>> CORRECT!
When I travel and eat delicious food with my family, I feel happy.
>> CORRECT!
When I feel my husband loves me and Imeet my seperated sons, I feel happy.
>> When my husband makes me feel that he loves me and when I get to spend time with my sons, I feel happy.
My family makes me happy.
>> CORRECT!
What I value the most is my family.
>> CORRECT!
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