Making natural soap

2010-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Today, I'll give you recipe for chamomile soap. Recipe *coconut oil:100g *palm oil:100g *olive oil:80g *evnening primrose oil:20g *sodium hydroxide: 43~44g *purified water:75g 1) Dissolve the sodium hydroxide 43~44g in purified water 75g and reduce the temperature about 50 degrees centigrade. (no sniffing) 2) Mix all oil and increase the teperature about 50 degrees centigrade. 3) Mix 1)+2) until it becomes traced. 4) Pour 3) into a mold. After 2 or 3 days, pull it and have to dry down it for 4 weeks. Then you can use it.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],     Thank you for the recipe of the Camomile soap. I wish I can try doing it when I have free time. kkk See you later! -Verna-   Today, I'll give you recipe for chamomile soap.>>Today, I'll give you the recipe for chamomile soap.Recipe >> Ingredients*coconut oil:100g*palm oil:100g*olive oil:80g*evnening primrose oil:20g*sodium hydroxide: 43~44g*purified water:75g >>Correct1) Dissolve the sodium hydroxide 43~44g in purified water 75g andreduce the temperature  for about 50 degrees centigrade.(no sniffing) >>Correct2) Mix all oil and increase the teperature about 50 degrees centigrade.>> Mix all the oil and increase the temperature for about 50 degrees centigrade.3) Mix 1)+2) until it becomes traced.>> Mix 1 and 2 ingredients.4) Pour 3) into a mold. >>CorrectAfter 2 or 3 days, pull it and have to dry down it for 4 weeks. >>After 2 or 3 days, pull it and dry it down for 4 weeks. Then you can use it. >>Correct

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