Making natural soap
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, I'll give you recipe for chamomile soap.
Recipe
*coconut oil:100g
*palm oil:100g
*olive oil:80g
*evnening primrose oil:20g
*sodium hydroxide: 43~44g
*purified water:75g
1) Dissolve the sodium hydroxide 43~44g in purified water 75g and
reduce the temperature about 50 degrees centigrade.
(no sniffing)
2) Mix all oil and increase the teperature about 50 degrees centigrade.
3) Mix 1)+2) until it becomes traced.
4) Pour 3) into a mold.
After 2 or 3 days, pull it and have to dry down it for 4 weeks.
Then you can use it.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for the recipe of the Camomile soap.
I wish I can try doing it when I have free time. kkk
See you later!
-Verna-
Today, I'll give you recipe for chamomile soap.>>Today, I'll give you the recipe for chamomile soap.Recipe >> Ingredients*coconut oil:100g*palm oil:100g*olive oil:80g*evnening primrose oil:20g*sodium hydroxide: 43~44g*purified water:75g
>>Correct1) Dissolve the sodium hydroxide 43~44g in purified water 75g andreduce the temperature for about 50 degrees centigrade.(no sniffing)
>>Correct2) Mix all oil and increase the teperature about 50 degrees centigrade.>> Mix all the oil and increase the temperature for about 50 degrees centigrade.3) Mix 1)+2) until it becomes traced.>> Mix 1 and 2 ingredients.4) Pour 3) into a mold.
>>CorrectAfter 2 or 3 days, pull it and have to dry down it for 4 weeks.
>>After 2 or 3 days, pull it and dry it down for 4 weeks. Then you can use it.
>>Correct
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