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2021-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Rely -Whenever difficulties or situations are create, I rely on my parents or close teachers. 2. Advantage -I think my advantage is a positive mind. But if it\'s too much, like think positively then ruin it even when I have to worry... 3. Distraction -Distraction can be seen as having a lot of curiosity or energy around it. However, it can be seen bad when if it is invoked in public places. P.S. I was so happy to have a class with you today! I hope to see you again next time!^^

강사 첨삭

Thank you so much, Maria! I also enjoyed the class because of you. You were so active in class! See you!-Faith-

1. Rely

>> CORRECT
-Whenever difficulties or situations are create, I rely on my parents or close teachers.

>> Whenever difficulties or situations happen, I rely on my parents or close teachers.
2. Advantage

>> CORRECT
-I think my advantage is a positive mind.

>> CORRECT

But if it\'s too much, like think positively then ruin it even when I have to worry...

>> But if it\'s too much, like when I think positively then it\'s ruined, I still have to worry.
3. Distraction

>> CORRECT
-Distraction can be seen as having a lot of curiosity or energy around it.
>> CORRECT

However, it can be seen bad when if it is invoked in public places.

>> However, it can be seen bad if it is invoked in public places.
P.S. I was so happy to have a class with you today!

>> CORRECT

I hope to see you again next time!^^

>> CORRECT

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