malaria
학생이 쓴 원문
Malaria and dengue fever are kinds of tropical infectious diseases.
Why these diseases occur in Korea?
It is probably reasons of global warming and environmental pollution.
Unfortunately we will suffer from more sreious suffering not only malaria.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]!
That is basically my question for you why it is occurring in Korea? I heard from my students in the past that during summer there are a lot of mosquitos and I got worried for them but they said that it is fine because malaria is not common in your country. They even do not know about dengue. Let\'s talk about this later.
Aki
Malaria and dengue fever are kinds of tropical infectious diseases.
>> CORRECT!
Why these diseases occur in Korea?
>> Why do these diseases occur in Korea?
It is probably reasons of global warming and environmental pollution.
>> It is probably the reason for global warming and environmental pollution.
Unfortunately, we will suffer from more sreious suffering not only malaria
>>> Unfortunately we will suffer from more serious suffering not only malaria
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