Mammals
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] Do you think the marine mammals in your country are well protected?
Yes. I think so.
Because people are mammales too.
And all creatures in Earth have rights to protected.
Mammals in my country and all Earth will be protected!!
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected homework, [이름]! Please mind the notes I left for you. Happy weekend!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Do you think the marine mammals in your country are well protected?
Yes. I think so. Because people are mammales too.
>> As far as I know, yes because humans are mammals as well.
>> [Check the spelling of \"mammals\" and in written/formal English, don\'t start your sentence with the word \"because\". In spoken English, it\'s fine.]
And all creatures in Earth have rights to protected.
>> All creatures on Earth have rights to be protected.
>> [ In written/formal English, don\'t start your sentence with the word \"and\". It\'s acceptable in spoken English.]
Mammals in my country and all Earth will be protected!!
>> Mammals in my country and across the Earth will be protected!!
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