Man and wife

2015-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Talking method between man and wife. Many men and wives would not talk each other for a long time, because they feel it better not to talk than quarrel. Healthy conversation is essential to have a good married life. I will introduce you three principles to have a successful conversation between man and wife. First, tell him or her immediately if you get angry or feel sorry. If you lose the time to express your bad feeling, negativity will grow in your mind, and it lead to close your mouth. Second, open your deep mind when you talk. If you only talk about bad things of your spouse's attitude or behavior, it seem to be a blame. It is important that you ask his or her understanding by start talking like "I would like to say~~". Third, you need to considerate spouse's situation. If you stick to your thought, it can cause misunderstanding. You have to try to understand the other's mind. A good conversation between husband and wife will make happy life in their old age

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Dear [Name]. [이름],   A winsome Thursday to you! ^.^   The principles that you introduced will be helpful to me. I will keep them in mind. I know that those methods can really give me a happy married life.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you later! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Talking method between man and wife. >> Talking Method Between a Man and His Wife (If this is the title of your composition, the first letters of the important words should be capitalized. Don\'t use a punctuation mark at the end of the title.) >> OR: Talking Method Between Husbands and Wives Many men and wives would not talk each other for a long time, because they feel it better not to talk than quarrel. >> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: Many husbands and wives would not talk with each other for a long time, because they feel (that) it is better not to talk than quarrel. Healthy conversation is essential to have a good married life. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Healthy conversation is essential to have a happy married life. I will introduce you three principles to have a successful conversation between man and wife. >> I will introduce to you three principles of having a successful conversation between a man and his wife. (PATTERN: introduce someone/something to someone/something) >> OR: I will introduce to you three principles of having a successful conversation between a husband and his wife. >> OR: I will introduce to you three principles of successful conversations between husbands and his wives. First, tell him or her immediately if you get angry or feel sorry. >> CORRECT! If you lose the time to express your bad feeling, negativity will grow in your mind, and it lead to close your mouth. >> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: If you lose the time to express your bad feeling, negativity will grow in your mind, and it will lead you to close your mouth. Second, open your deep mind when you talk. >> CORRECT! If you only talk about bad things of your spouse\'s attitude or behavior, it seem to be a blame. >> I THINK WHAT YOU REALLY MEAN IS: If you only talk about bad things of your spouse\'s attitude or behavior, you are to be blamed. It is important that you ask his or her understanding by start talking like \"I would like to say~~\". >> It is important that you ask his or her understanding by first saying like, \"I would like to say ...\" Third, you need to considerate spouse\'s situation. >> Third, you need to consider your spouse\'s situation. >> OR: Third, you need to be considerate to your spouse\'s situation. If you stick to your thought, it can cause misunderstanding. >> CORRECT! You have to try to understand the other\'s mind. >> You have to try to understand your partner\'s mind. >> OR: You have to try to understand your better half\'s mind. A good conversation between husband and wife will make happy life in their old age >> A good conversation between a husband and his wife will make a happy life for them in their old age. >> OR: A good conversation between a husband and his wife will give them a happy life in their old age.

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