mandatory collection of school
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When I was a student, I had to submit many kind of collections to school.
At first ,tuition is 4times one year, hay is per summer vacation and recycling items were collected very often .
My sister and I wrer very good students, we submited diligently everytime.
But nowdays mandatory collections disiappeared in school.
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When I was a student, I had to submit many kind of collections to school.
>>> When I was a student, I had to pay many kind of collections to school.
>>> When I was a student, I had to pay various kinds of school fees.
At first ,tuition is 4times one year, hay is per summer vacation and recycling items were collected very often .
At first ,tuition is 4times one year, hay is per summer vacation and recycling items were collected very often .
>>> At first, we have to pay tuition fee four times in a year, pay is per summer vacation and also recycling items were collected very often.
My sister and I wrer very good students, we submited diligently everytime.
My sister and I wrer very good students, we submited diligently everytime.
>>> My sister and I were very good students, we diligently submitted on time.
But nowdays mandatory collections disiappeared in school.
But nowdays mandatory collections disiappeared in school.
>>> But nowadays, mandatory collections are no longer allowed in schools.
>>> Nowadays, mandatory monetary collections have been abolished
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