manic monday ye
학생이 쓴 원문
Last sunday was a bright day, so I went to ride a bike on the road
that is beside han river in S.korea. Indeed, that was a awesome
moment in my life. because, the river was shiny like SUN and many
people lay on the grass like a drawing. And, I've got some beef
with my parents.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!! It was really nice to hear that you had a g reat time with the nature and a
time with your parents. Just keep on sending your compositions and stories that
you would like to impart. ^^ Take care and talk to you soon then.
Teacher May
manic monday ye
>> Manic Monday to you.
Last sunday was a bright day, so I went to ride a bike on the road. >> Correctthat is beside han river in S.korea. Indeed, that was a awesome.>> It was located beside Han river in South Korea.
Indeed, that was a awesome moment in my life. because, the river was shiny like SUN and many >> Indeed, that was an awesome moment in my life because the river was bright and shiny like the ray of the sun.people lay on the grass like a drawing. And, I've got some beef with my parents.
>> Many people lay on the grass like in a painting while eating some beef with my parents.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.