manic monday ye

2011-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Last sunday was a bright day, so I went to ride a bike on the road that is beside han river in S.korea. Indeed, that was a awesome moment in my life. because, the river was shiny like SUN and many people lay on the grass like a drawing. And, I've got some beef with my parents.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!! It was really nice to hear that you had a g reat time with the nature and a  time with your parents. Just keep on sending your compositions and stories that you would like to impart. ^^ Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher May   manic monday ye >> Manic Monday to you. Last sunday was a bright day, so I went to ride a bike on the road. >> Correctthat is beside han river in S.korea. Indeed, that was a awesome.>> It was located beside Han river in South Korea. Indeed, that was a awesome moment in my life. because, the river was shiny like SUN and many >> Indeed, that was an awesome moment in my life because the river was bright and shiny like the ray of the sun.people lay on the grass like a drawing. And, I've got some beef with my parents. >> Many people lay on the grass like in a painting while eating some beef with my parents.

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