Manny won the match to Cloty.

2010-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Manny won the match to Cloty. He could win because he used more punch than opposite.

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Hi!   Yeah, I agree.. Manny keeps on blowing Clottey with wild punches. But I admire Clottey for being so tough. He took a lot of punches from Manny but he was not knocked out..^^   Manny won the match to Cloty.>> Manny won the match against Clottey. He could win because he used more punch than opposite. >> He won because he used more punch than his opponent.

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