'Manolo Blahnik'

I searched the 'Manolo Blahnik' on the internet. I found that he is very famous shoe designer. He was born in 1942. He is a Spanish but he graduated the Geneva University and he was major in literature there. He became very famous after London Fashion Boutique in 1969. We can see his shoes in the Sitcom 'Sex and the city'. In that sitcom, Vick proposed to Carrie with the Manolo Blahnik's shoes, not the rings. When Carrie met a robber in the sitcom, she said that he could take everything away without her Manolo Blahnik's shoes. I saw the shoes in the picture. They were very gorgeous and lovely. Someday when I get a lot of money, I want to buy it.

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