Manseh korea!

Yesturday was samiljul. That was the day that Yoo Kwon Soon and other people had parade to take back Korean`s freedom from Japan. I am very proud of my ancestor who give up their life to save Korea. If i was one fo that people i wouldn`t do that because i am very afraid of death. So in samiljul we have to be thankful to people who gave up their life to save the land that I am living now.

Hi [이름]! Congratulations on your first day of class! I think you did a marvelous job. Keep being friendly. It\'s normal to be anxious since this is a new chapter in your life, but I know you will do great ^^. Also I am happy that South Korea is an open country, thanks to Yoo Kwon Soon I was able to meet my students! Including you of course! (^___^) Have fun and keep safe this weekend okay?

~t.Karen >.<

Yesturday was samiljul.

>>* Please be careful with your spelling. ^^

>> Yesterday was samiljul.

 That was the day that Yoo Kwon Soon and other people had parade to take back Korean`s freedom from Japan.

>>*Please take note of your article : \'A\'

>> That was the day that Yoo Kwon Soon and other people had a parade to take back Korean`s freedom from Japan.

 I am very proud of my ancestor who give up their life to save Korea.

>> *Please check your subject-verb agreement. You have to say \'ancestorS\' since your are talking about many people (\'they\').

>> I am very proud of my ancestors who give up their life to save Korea.

If i was one fo that people i wouldn`t do that because i am very afraid of death.

>> *Check your spelling, be careful when typing: \"OF\".

>> Capitalize the word \'I\' always. ^^

>> Check on your grammar,  use \'those\' instead of \'that\'.

>> Use a comma [ , ] to separate your clauses/phrases.

>> If i was one of  those people, I wouldn`t do that because I am very afraid of death.

 So in samiljul we have to be thankful to people who gave up their life to save the land that I am living now.

>>* Use the article \'the\' to indicate specific people/persons.

>>* Check the use of your prepositions, use \'in\' to indicate places.

>> So in samiljul we have to be thankful to the people who gave up their life to save the land that I am living in now.