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Korean, mathematics and English are the most important subjects for students in my country. Students in Korea have to get high score in these subjects for their success. We only tend to study subjects which are related to the entrance exam for university because teachers and parents always stress the importance of major subjects that I mentioned above. If we graduate a major university in Seoul, it will be easy to get a good job. However, students learn a lot of things after school as well as regular curriculum such as music, arts and sports these days regardless of their intention. Parents tend to send their children to various institutions after school because they want their children to survive in this competitive environment.
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Korean mathematics and English are the most important subjects for students in my country.
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Students in Korea have to get high scores in these subjects for their success.
>>> CORRECT
We only tend to study subjects which are related to the entrance exam for university because teachers and parents always stress the importance of major subjects which were mentioned above.
>>> CORRECT
If we graduate in a major university in Seoul, it will be easy to get a good job.
>>> CORRECT
However, students learn a lot of things after school as well as regular curriculum such as music, arts and sports these days regardless of their intention.
>>> CORRECT
Parents tend to send their children to various institutions after school because they want their children to survive in this competitive environment.
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