many errors
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many errors in my life. I am just keeping on going my way controlling the errors. I want myself to do well and will do.
Time that I couldn't grap was gone. And time that I can grap is coming.
In this time, I'm totally growing up.
It's a kind of self-hypnotism to do better.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for doing this composition even with your busy schedule. I really appreciate it. You did a great job! Anyway, regarding your mistakes or errors in life, I know you can do better. At least now you realize it. All you need is motivation and I know you\'ll go along way. Think positive and you will succeed! See you tomorrow. Have a great day!
T. Nica ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
There are many errors in my life.
>> Correct!
>> I have many mistakes in my life.
I am just keeping on going my way controlling the errors.
>> I just keep on going my way while controlling errors.
>> I just keep on going my way while controlling mistakes.
I want myself to do well and will do.
>> I want myself to do will and I will do it. Time that I couldn\'t grap was gone.
>> Correct!
And time that I can grap is coming.
>> Correct!In this time, I\'m totally growing up.>> This time, I\'m totally growing up.It\'s a kind of self-hypnotism to do better.
>> It\'s like self-hypnotism to do better.
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