Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, th
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Many countries have focused their economic development to be advanced nations.
>>Many countries have focused on their economic development to be advanced nations.
However, some people argue that there are more important thing such as welfare, public order.
>> However, some people argue that there are more important things such as welfare, public order.
It is controversial whether economic progress is the most significant goal to governments.
>>CORRECT!
In my case, economic progress plays an important role in a number of nations.
>>CORRECT!
Economic grown does not promote only economic activity but also several positive effects like job creation and active supply and demand.
>>Economic growth does not only promote economic activity but also several positive effects like job creation and active supply and demand.
These are chances to be advanced nations for small nations.
>>These are chances for small nations to be advanced nations.
Therefore, focusing economic progress affects nations positively and ,also, supplement countries’ faults.
>> Therefore, focusing on economic progress affects nations positively and also supplements countries’ faults.
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