Many people feel that students should learn from online materials while others feel that it is bette
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I think both materials have advantages depending on the people or generation. I prefer to use paper when I read books but young people consider online materials are more convenient than printed ones because most of them grow up by using various computer based devices. They are used to deal with these devices. As a result, teachers at school have used power point documents instead of blackboard.
Students also use tablets or laptops when they need to memo. However, I feel like uncomfortable to use these devices because I am not used to it and have difficulties small and bright screen, I also prefer to read books with papers because I can\'t pay attention while I am reading e-books. People\'s life have changed every era and we have adapted very well if it was difficult. In the 4th industrial revolution, the education of computers and related subjects is the most important thing people have to learn. Even though, some people have a problem to use digital devices, we should learn it
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Good day Mr. [이름]! Motivation also helps in making you active in life. You will struggle more to fulfill your goals. A self-motivated person always discovers a way to understand the issues hindering the path to complete a task. Moreover, they do not require other people’s support to accomplish a challenging task close to them.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think both materials have advantages depending on the people or generation.
>>> CORRECT
I prefer to use paper when I read books but young people consider online materials are more convenient than printed ones because most of them grow up by using various computer-based devices.
>>> CORRECT
They are used to deal with these devices.
>>> CORRECT
As a result, teachers at school have used power point documents instead of blackboard.
>>> CORRECT
Students also use tablets or laptops when they need to memo.
Students also use tablets or laptops when they need to memo.
>>> CORRECT
However, I feel like uncomfortable to use these devices because I am not used to it and have difficulties small and bright screen, I also prefer to read books with papers because I can\'t pay attention while I am reading e-books.
>>> However, I feel uncomfortable to use these devices because I am not used to it and I have difficulties in small and bright screen, I also prefer to read books with papers because I can\'t pay attention while I am reading e-books.
People\'s life have changed every era and we have adapted very well if it was difficult.
>>> People\'s life has been changing every era and we have adapted very well even if it\'s difficult.
In the 4th industrial revolution, the education of computers and related subjects is the most important thing people have to learn.
>>> In the 4th industrial revolution, the education of computers and related subjects were the most important thing people have to learn.
Even though, some people have a problem to use digital devices, we should learn it
>>> Even though, people are having problems using digital devices, we should learn it...
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