Many people find that visiting a certain place brings back a childhood memory very strongly. Where h
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Because I hung out with my friends everyday in the playground in my childhood, it is the place where brings back my childhood memory very strongly.
I rode sea-saw, swing and jungle-gym and played house with sand there.
I also did some games like hide-and-seek and hopscotch with my friends.
Although playgrounds these days look a little different with today\'s, I can remember my childhood when I was busy playing with my friends without any concerns at all and I really miss it.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. Thank you for doing your homework. It was well-done as always. Childhood memories have that effect. It would make us want to go back to being a child again.^^ I hope we could talk about it in one of our classes. Have a good evening. Talk to you in class. ~Teacher Jane c\", )
Because I hung out with my friends everyday in the playground in my childhood, it is the place where brings back my childhood memory very strongly.
>>> Because I hung out with my friends every day in the playground in my childhood, it is the place that brings back my childhood memories very strongly.
I rode sea-saw, swing and jungle-gym and played house with sand there.
>>> I played on the seesaw, swing, and jungle-gym and played house with sand there.
I also did some games like hide-and-seek and hopscotch with my friends.
>>> I also played some games like hide-and-seek and hopscotch with my friends.
Although playgrounds these days look a little different with today\'s, I can remember my childhood when I was busy playing with my friends without any concerns at all and I really miss it.
>>> Although playgrounds these days look a little different from when I was a child, I can remember my childhood when I was busy playing with my friends without any concerns at all and I really miss it.
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