Many things are influencing me when I buy something.
학생이 쓴 원문
I buy something through internet.
Because internet is faster then normal route.
There are many stores around us.
And we often buy celebration thing.
And we play with it home.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for doing your homework. Keep on practicing your grammar and writing skills. ^_^
I buy something through internet.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>I usually buy something through internet.
Because internet is faster then normal route.
>>>Because internet is faster then normal routes.
OR>>>Because internet is faster then a normal route.
And we often buy celebration thing. And we play with it home.
>>>We often buy things for special events and we play with it home.
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