Mar 27th\'s homework

2024-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

학생이 쓴 원문

Please describe your neighborhood in detail. Answer in 3 to 5 sentences. There is a small hairdresser at first basement level in our building. There\'s a grandmother living here who is the oldest person in the building. But she always stay healthy and so kind to others. I hope she lives happy.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

I’m glad you found the composition board. Thanks for answering the homework. It’s awesome that you are closed to a hair salon. You can always have a quick haircut if you want. I’m happy that you also have a kind neighbor. ^^

See you later!^^

There is a small hairdresser at first basement level in our building.

>> There is a small hair salon at the basement of our building.

There\'s a grandmother living here who is the oldest person in the building.

>>We also have a grandmother who lives in the building.

But she always stay healthy and so kind to others.

>>She’s healthy and always kind to us.

I hope she lives happy.

>> I hope she stays happy.

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