Mar 31th\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi,
Thanks for sharing about your first day. I agree, it truly is nerve-wracking on our first day of work but we get through it each day. ^^
-Teacher Ash
First time in my company, I was very nervous.
>> I was very nervous on my first day at the company.
Because I didn\'t know about my poosition.
>>It’s because I did not know my role in the company.
And I\'ve never used Excel before.
>> I also never used Excel before.
Fortunately, my superior treated me comfortable and taught me kindly.
>> Fortunately, my superior treated me well as she trained me.
I could learn and adapt slowly.
>> I was able to learn and adapt slowly.
It wasn\'t hard day for me so, I can\'t remember in detail.
>>It was not a very difficult day for me so, I can’t remember the detail.
The way back home was quite hard work.
>>The way back home was quite hard.
I had to transfer to the subway twice in rush hour.
>> I had to transfer to the subway twice during rush hour.
There was no seat for me Because really crowded.
>> There was no seat for me because it was really crowded.
That was only thing that was hard for me.
>> That was the only thing that was hard for me.
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