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2024-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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First time in my company, I was very nervous. Because I didn\'t know about my poosition. And I\'ve never used Excel before. Fortunately, my superior treated me comfortable and taught me kindly. I could learn and adapt slowly. It wasn\'t hard day for me so, I can\'t remember in detail. The way back home was quite hard work. I had to transfer to the subway twice in rush hour. There was no seat for me Because really crowded. That was only thing that was hard for me.

강사 첨삭

Hi,

Thanks for sharing about your first day. I agree, it truly is nerve-wracking on our first day of work but we get through it each day. ^^ 


-Teacher Ash

First time in my company, I was very nervous.

>> I was very nervous on my first day at the company. 


 Because I didn\'t know about my poosition. 

>>It’s because I did not know my role in the company. 


And I\'ve never used Excel before.

>> I also never used Excel before. 


 Fortunately, my superior treated me comfortable and taught me kindly.

>> Fortunately, my superior treated me well as she trained me. 


 I could learn and adapt slowly. 

>> I was able to learn and adapt slowly. 


It wasn\'t hard day for me so, I can\'t remember in detail. 

>>It was not a very difficult day for me so, I can’t remember the detail. 


The way back home was quite hard work.

>>The way back home was quite hard.


 I had to transfer to the subway twice in rush hour. 

>> I had to transfer to the subway twice during rush hour. 


There was no seat for me Because really crowded.

>> There was no seat for me because it was really crowded.


 That was only thing that was hard for me.

>> That was the only thing that was hard for me.


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