March 15th Thursday

2018-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Thanks for your advice~!!^^ I wish that I could develop step by step. Whenever I get a opportunity talking to you, I could speak more confidently in English. At first I was very nervous, I don't say any word. Here are my homework you gave me: HOMEWORK: Composition writing! In not more than ten sentences, write an essay stating the worst thing about the internet. The worst thing about internet I've ever experienced is when it is not working well. At that time, I was locating the place to meet with senior collegue there by using my phone 3G. But I couldn't locate it. Because my phone 3G was much slower than any other phones. Although I could hear people's voice calling me on the phone I failed to locate the place I've got to. I was frustated.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday SPRING!

Thank you for the effort!

I hope you always do your best.

See you on Friday.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


Thanks for your advice~!!^^
I wish that I could develop step by step.
Whenever I get a opportunity talking to you, I could speak more confidently in English.

>>>  Whenever I get an opportunity to talk with you, I can speak more confidently.

At first I was very nervous, I don\'t say any word. 

>>> At first I was very nervous that I couldn\'t say a word.
 Here are my homework you gave me: 

>>> Here is the homework that you gave me.

 HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
In not more than ten sentences, write an essay stating the worst thing about the internet.

The worst thing about internet I\'ve ever experienced is when it is not working well. 

>>> The worst thing about the internet I\'ve ever experienced is when it was not working well.
At that time, I was locating the place to meet with senior collegue there by using my phone 3G.

>>> At that time, I was locating the place where I should meet my senior colleague through my 3G phone.

But I couldn\'t locate it.

>>> Correct!

Because my phone 3G was much slower than any other phones.

>>> Because my 3G phone was much slower than any other phones.

Although I could hear people\'s voice calling me on the phone I failed to locate the place I\'ve got to.

>>> Although, there was no problem with the other applications on the phone, the locator didn\'t work well.

I was frustated.

>>> I was frustrated.

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