March 1st activity 100th anniversary
학생이 쓴 원문
Tommorrw is 100th anniversary of activity about Japanese. It is on Friday so people will rest for three days. In 100years many things were changed. The movie about this activity was realased.
강사 첨삭
Tommorrw is 100th anniversary of activity about Japanese.
>> Tomorrow is the 100th anniversary of this activity done by Koreans against the Japanese.
It is on Friday so people will rest for three days.
>> Correct
In 100years many things were changed.
>> In 100 years, many things have changed.
The movie about this activity was realased.
>> A movie about this activity was also released.
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