mari
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Jean
1. failed...or
2. fill out...when
3. cost of living, for
4. homestay, whether
5. I\'ll try to...if I could
1. Payment failed or was aborted.
>> The payment either failed or was aborted.
2. When I made a contract with real estate, i filled out the form on online.
>> When I made a contract with the real estate, I filled out the form online.
3. The cost of living keeps rising in Australia and we spend most of money for rent.
>> The cost of living keeps rising in Australia, and we spend most of our money on rent.
4. You will need to speak to your homestay host about whether your visitor can stay with.
>> You\'ll need to speak to your homestay host whether your visitor can stay with you or stay the night.
5. I\'ll try to do study hard, if i could back to student.
>> If I were a student again, I would try to study hard.
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