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1. gradually
2. endanger
3. very well, although
4. is she
5. very much, also
1 . Nowadays, The global warming problem is gradually getting serious more and more.
>> Nowadays, the global warming problem is gradually getting more and more serious.
2. I don\'t want to endanger other people.
>> CORRECT~~
3. Although she is very talkative she listens very well too
>> Although she is very talkative, she listens very well too.
>> OR: She listens very well even though she\'s chatty.
4. Is she allergic to anything else I should know about?
>> Is there anything else she\'s allergic to that I should know about?
5. I love her very much, but i also hate her.
>> CORRECT~~
I like to listen to music very much also watching movies.
>> I like listening to music very much and I also enjoy watching movies.
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