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2019-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. gradually 2. endanger 3. very well, although 4. is she 5. very much, also 1 . Nowadays, The global warming problem is gradually getting serious more and more. 2. I don\'t want to endanger other people. 3. Although she is very talkative she listens very well too 4. Is she allergic to anything else I should know about? 5. I love her very much, but i also hate her. I like to listen to music very much also watching movies.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.


 


Cheers!

Jean


1. gradually
2. endanger
3. very well, although
4. is she
5. very much, also

1 . Nowadays, The global warming problem is gradually getting serious more and more.

>> Nowadays, the global warming problem is gradually getting more and more serious.


 2. I don\'t want to endanger other people.

>> CORRECT~~


 3. Although she is very talkative she listens very well too

>> Although she is very talkative, she listens very well too.

>> OR: She listens very well even though she\'s chatty. 


 4. Is she allergic to anything else I should know about?

>> Is there anything else she\'s allergic to that I should know about? 


 5. I love her very much, but i also hate her. 

>> CORRECT~~


     I like to listen to music very much also watching movies.

>> I like listening to music very much and I also enjoy watching movies.

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