Maria's teacher

Hello. My name is [Name]. Today I want to talk about my first grade teacher, miss rachall. She is the beastst teacher I ever had. Well actally she is the first teacher. It's because I didn't go to the kindergarden. But I think she would be the most nice teacher. Anyway why i like my teacher that much? First, she makes us many activitys. Like, a tri to a real live castle, to learn history. Or a talent show to learn each others dream. And when she take us to her home and made a pie. So you see, How I like my first teacher, and why I like her so much. I hope you likes your teacher. BYE~ BYE~~~~~~ THE END

Hi there, Ji[이름]! Your teacher, Miss. [Name], does sound like a wonderful teacher. Thanks for sharing this story with me. Please review my corrections below. Take note of the proper capitalization of nouns. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello. >> CORRECT! My name is [Name]. >> CORRECT! Today I want to talk about my first grade teacher, miss rachall. >> Today, I want to talk about my first grade teacher, Miss. [Name].She is the beastst teacher I ever had. >> She is the best teacher I have ever had.Well actally she is the first teacher. >> Well, actually, she was my first teacher.It\'s because I didn\'t go to the kindergarden. >> It\'s because I didn\'t go to kindergarten.But I think she would be the most nice teacher. >> I think she was the nicest teacher ever.Anyway why i like my teacher that much? >> Anyway, you might be asking why do I like my teacher that much?First, she makes us many activitys. >> First, she prepared many activities for us.Like, a tri to a real live castle, to learn history. >> For instance, we went to a real castle to learn about history.Or a talent show to learn each others dream. >> We also had a talent show to learn about our dreams. And when she take us to her home and made a pie. >> Moreover, she took us to her house and she made us a pie. So you see, How I like my first teacher, and why I like her so much. >> So, now you know why I like my first teacher so much.I hope you likes your teacher. >> I hope you like your teacher too.BYE~ BYE~~~~~~ >> CORRECT! THE END >> CORRECT!