marie~ help me plz today

homework I become Pyknic to remove my stress north korea always tell to made south korea as communism. MY introduce hello. my name is David. i'm twenty six years old. I am not married and living with my coworker in seoul since 2010years. there are 4 peoples in my family (about? of?) father, mother, younger sister and me. we don't live together. but we always are happy I went kongju university about electronic for 4years so I finished it before 2years. I'm working as a captain in company. I enjoy my work that very much and very hard. I prefer to play basketball with my coworker on weekend. so we will have a game with us competitor in gym on this weekend. my another hobby is going club with my friends on Friday. i'm socialize well with anyone now.

Hey there David! Thanks for doing your homework. Here are my corrections in your introduction speech. Review them well. Lots of luck and do your best on the OPIC test okay? FIGHTING! Ciao~ ~Teacher Marie~ I become Pyknic to remove my stress>> I turned pyknic whenever I\'m stressed.north korea always tell to made south korea as communism.>> North Korea always make it look like South Korea is a communist country too.MY introduce>> This is my introduction.hello. my name is David.>> correct OR >> Hello. My name is [Name].i\'m twenty six years old. >> correct Or >> I\'m twenty six years old.I am not married and living with my coworker in seoul since 2010years.>> I am not yet married. I\'ve been living in Seoul with my coworker since the year 2010.there are 4 peoples in my family (about? of?) father, mother, younger sister and me.>> There are four people in my family - my father, my mother, my younger sister and me. OR >>The people in my family are my parents, my younger sister and me.we don\'t live together. but we always are happy>> Although we don\'t live together, we are still happy.I went kongju university about electronic for 4years>> I studied Electronics at Kongju University for 4 years.so I finished it before 2years.>> I finished it two years ago. OR >> I only finished two years of studying.I\'m working as a captain in company.>> correctI enjoy my work that very much and very hard.>> I enjoy my work even though it\'s very hard.I prefer to play basketball with my coworker on weekend.>> I prefer to play basketball with my coworker on the weekend. OR >>I like to play basketball with my coworker every weekend.so we will have a game with us competitor in gym on this weekend.>> This coming weekend, we will have a basketball game at the gym.my another hobby is going club with my friends on Friday.>> I also like going to clubs on Friday nights with my friends.i\'m socialize well with anyone now. >> I can socialize well with everyone now.