Marketing myselft

2012-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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Dear [Name]. [Name]: I have began to market myself as a personnel manager on a permanent part time basis to small firms (25-75 employes0 iin the greater metro area. I am open to any type of organization or industry, but I prefer professional firms in such field as : Law, Medicine, Engineering, Accounting, Financial Planning, Dentistry and Architecture. Should you be cognizant of any businuess associates, friends, or acquaintances who may be considering the need for a part time personnel manager, I would appreciate being provided with their names so that I may contact them personally. Any further assisstance or suggestions would also be greatly appreciated.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sophia!!^-^ Thank you for your composition. You are very diligent. Keep it up! See you again in class nextweek. Enjoy your weekend!! ^-^ __Teacher Nica__   Dear [Name]. [Name]:I have began to market myself as a personnel manager on a permanent part time basis to small firms (25-75 employes0 iin the greater metro area. >> I begun to market myself as a personal manager in a permanent part time basis in small firms (25-75 employyes) in greater metro area. I am open to any type of organization or industry, but I prefer professional firms in such field as : Law, Medicine, Engineering, Accounting, Financial Planning, Dentistry and Architecture. >> Correct! Should you be cognizant of any businuess associates, friends, or acquaintances who may be considering the need for a part time personnel manager, I would appreciate being provided with their names so that I may contact them personally. >> Correct! Any further assisstance or suggestions would also be greatly appreciated. >> Correct!

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