Marketing strategies
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I think this is a good chance to build a positive brand image. Now people want a brand to have more responsibility socially. That\'s why the marketing term \'CSR; Corporate Social Responsibility\' has been regarded as a crucial concept in the marketing process. Therefore, I\'ll plan the advertising alarming about disposing of masks indifferently. Once the brand builds a positive brand image and good relationship with customers, it would be led to increased profit for the company. The advertising will contain the message that people shouldn\'t throw away their masks outside by informing how the disposal of masks in public outdoor has side effects. Also, I\'ll make the company\'s employees volunteer to pick to disposal of masks in crowded public space and shoot the video of their activities to make advertising. With these marketing strategies, our company would be able to give customers the impression that we do good things for society.
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How are you doing [이름]! It is great to read from you here on this site.
Corporate Social Responsibility is what separates the good companies from the not so good ones. This defines businesses in terms how they care about consumers and the effects of their product in society likewise, towards nature.
I am impressed by the simplicity and efficiency of your advertising campaign as it is doable and cost- effective. It raises consciousness to all face mask users to actively participate in the clean up drive and also help stop the spread of COVID 19 and other viruses.
You have done a wonderful job here on your essay, [이름]! I will see you in class again tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
I think this is a good chance to build a positive brand image.
>> Correct!
Now people want a brand to have more responsibility socially.
>> Correct!
Or>> Now, people want a brand to have more social responsibility.
That\'s why the marketing term \'CSR; Corporate Social Responsibility\' has been regarded as a crucial concept in the marketing process.
>> Correct!
Therefore, I\'ll plan the advertising alarming about disposing of masks indifferently.
>> Correct!
Or>> Hence, I\'ll plan an advertisement alarming people about disposing masks improperly.
Once the brand builds a positive brand image and good relationship with customers, it would be led to increased profit for the company.
>> Once the brand builds a positive brand image and good relationship with customers, it will lead to increased profit for the company.
The advertising will contain the message that people shouldn\'t throw away their masks outside by informing how the disposal of masks in public outdoor has side effects.
>> The advertising will contain the message that people shouldn\'t throw away their masks outside by informing them how the disposal of masks in public por outdoor places has side effects. / (...negative effects)
Also, I\'ll make the company\'s employees volunteer to pick to disposal of masks in crowded public space and shoot the video of their activities to make advertising.
>> Also, I\'ll make the company\'s employees volunteer to pick up and dispose of the masks in crowded public space and shoot the video of their activities to make it an advertising campaign.
With these marketing strategies, our company would be able to give customers the impression that we do good things for society.
>> With these marketing strategies, our company will be able to give customers the impression that we do good things for society.
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