Marry Christmax !!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Jeny
It\'s Christmax eve
But, i can not feel it these days
How about you?
Anyway, Marry Chiristmax :)
1- These days, I have to learn creative how to make video or short .
2- We need to construct new bridge.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jon,
We must do our best in order to be successful, but before we become successful we must undergo a certain training and sometimes it is dangerous.
I hope we can be successful in the future even if it is very difficult.
Merry Christmas!!! I can feel the Christmas spirit.
T. Jeny
>>correct
It\'s Christmax eve
It\'s Christmax eve
>>It\'s Christmas eve.
But, i can not feel it these days
But, i can not feel it these days
>>correct
How about you?
How about you?
>>correct
Anyway, Marry Chiristmax :)
>>Anyway, Merry Christmas :)
1- These days, I have to learn creative how to make video or short .
Anyway, Marry Chiristmax :)
>>Anyway, Merry Christmas :)
1- These days, I have to learn creative how to make video or short .
>>These days, I have to learn to be creative on how to make videos or short clips.
2- We need to construct new bridge.
2- We need to construct new bridge.
>>We need to construct a new bridge.
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