Mars
학생이 쓴 원문
If people can go to the mars,i think starbuck and Mc donald is not able to
have a position in Mars.Because,Mars is the planet that we never experienced.So,If we eat fast food and juice,our body will not able to digest just like moon.So i think the food will be made like a small one
강사 첨삭
Hello, David! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
If people can go to the mars,i think starbuck and Mc donald is not able to
have a position in Mars.
>>> If people can go to mars, I think Starbucks and McDonald\'s are not able to have a position on Mars.
Because,Mars is the planet that we never experienced.
>>> Because Mars is the planet that we never experienced.
So,If we eat fast food and juice,our body will not able to digest just like moon.
>>> So, If we eat fast food and juice, our body will not able to digest just like on the moon.
So i think the food will be made like a small one
>>> I think the food will be made into small particles.
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