Marvelrous Friday XD

2014-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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huh? Yeah... it's finally Friday. But my mind isn't easy due to a final exam. Although I want to take a rest more, I have to study. :'( But the truth that the summer vacation isn't far makes me cheered. Fortunately, it isn't too hot. Of course we can get sweaty after a small activity. I can't imagain how I can endure a summer. It is already getting hotter than before. I think I should go swim to avoid the heat during the vacation. Anyway, how can I get information to talk with foreigners in the internet? If you have any recommendations or tips, please notice me. If I can, I will try. Have a great weekend. Be safe :) <Essay> Showing need in a future firms is the best way I think. In order to learn something, they should feel necessity or lots of interest. But they don't have much interest so they don't study. So the only way that encourages them is to show the need in the society or corporations.

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Hi there [이름]^^   Here is a tip for you:   If you have a facebook account look for foreigners that you can add from another country and introduce yourself. Explain that your goal is to make friends and practice your English. It might be tricky and who knows you\'ll get lucky and find a person that have the same goals like you. :)   I did this before and I have a few friends in my facebook that I communicate in English with. A few of them are Koreans that were introduced by my students before.   It is Friday!^^ Even if you study take a time to have a break because you deserve it.   Happy weekend^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you:   huh? Yeah... it\'s finally Friday. >> CORRECT OR> Wow! It really is Friday^^But my mind isn\'t easy due to a final exam. >> CORRECT OR> I am not that relaxed since I have a final exam to think of. Although I want to take a rest more, I have to study. :\'( >> Although I want to take more rest , I have to study. :\'( But the truth that the summer vacation isn\'t far makes me cheered. >> CORRECT OR> Knowing that summer is near cheers me up! ^^Fortunately, it isn\'t too hot. Of course we can get sweaty after a small activity. >> CORRECT OR> Good thing that it\'s not too hot but we still sweat with a little activity.I can\'t imagain how I can endure a summer. It is already getting hotter than before. >> I can\'t imagine how I can endure summer. It is already getting hotter than before.I think I should go swim to avoid the heat during the vacation.>> CORRECT OR> I must go swimming to fight the heat of summer.Anyway, how can I get information to talk with foreigners in the internet? >> CORRECT OR> How can I get to know foreigners in the internet?  If you have any recommendations or tips, please notice me. If I can, I will try.>> CORRECT OR> If you can recommend then let me know. I will try my best.Have a great weekend.Be safe :)<Essay>Showing need in a future firms is the best way I think. >> Showing needs for it in future firms is the best way I think.  In order to learn something, they should feel necessity or lots of interest. >>  In order to learn something, they should feel the necessity or lots of interest.  But they don\'t have much interest so they don\'t study. >> CORRECT OR> They need enough interest to consider studying.  So the only way that encourages them is to show the need in the society or corporations. >> CORRECT OR> So to encourage them, I must show the need in the society or corporations.  

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