Matching service
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I don\'t think matchmaking can reduce divorce rate remarkably. The divorce rate in Korea is gradually increasing and the reasons are very different. Especially elderly divorcing is occupying big amount. Most young people want natural meeting with future partners, and they are attending a variety of gatherings or events. They even join matching shows on broadcasting channels. I don\'t know how matching services reduce the divorce rate.
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Happy Friday, Gi [이름]!
I agree with you! Having a professional do the matchmaking does not guarantee a successful marriage. I think that even if two people have similar personalities or interests, there still needs to be attraction, and love is more important for a marriage to last.
-T. Caitlyn
I don\'t think matchmaking can reduce divorce rate remarkably.
>> I don\'t think matchmaking can remarkably reduce the divorce rate.
The divorce rate in Korea is gradually increasing and the reasons are very different.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: The divorce rate in Korea is gradually increasing, and the reasons vary widely.
Especially elderly divorcing is occupying big amount.
>> Divorces among the elderly account for a large proportion.
Most young people want natural meeting with future partners, and they are attending a variety of gatherings or events.
>> Most young people want to meet their future partners naturally, and they attend a variety of gatherings and events.
They even join matching shows on broadcasting channels.
>> CORRECT
I don\'t know how matching services reduce the divorce rate.
>> CORRECT
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