Math test.
학생이 쓴 원문
Today I was really nervous in 5th class.
All of my classmates will take Math test.
Also, my mom said that if my garade is 100% and she will give me five boxes or buy me new items in Kartrider game.
I really wanted to have new items like a car or a motorcycle.
I was really nervous if I got wrong.
My heart was jumping really fast than usual.
Finally I got a 100%! I thought got 100% because I focused in problems.
Now on Saturday, I might have new items in my Kartrider game.
Ireally can't wait to buy new items.
강사 첨삭
Congratulations [이름]! You're such a bright child! Keep it up.^^ -Teacher JM
Today I was really nervous in 5th class.
>>>Today I was really nervous in my 5th class.All of my classmates will take Math test.
>>>All of my classmates took a Math test.Also, my mom said that if my garade is 100% and she will give me five boxes or buy me new items in Kartrider game.
>>>On top of this, my mom said that if my grade is 100%, she will give me five boxes or buy me new items for the Kartrider game.I really wanted to have new items like a car or a motorcycle.
>>>CorrectI was really nervous if I got wrong.
>>>I was really nervous that I might have gotten something wrong.My heart was jumping really fast than usual.
>>>My heart was jumping really faster than usual.
Finally I got a 100%! I thought got 100% because I focused in problems.
>>>Finally, I got 100%! I think I got 100% because I focused on the problems.Now on Saturday, I might have new items in my Kartrider game.
>>>Now on Saturday, I might have new items for my Kartrider game.Ireally can't wait to buy new items.
>>>I really can't wait to buy the new items.
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