May 30, 2016

Do you know Internet of Things (IoT) house keeper? During last class, I mentioned IoT house keeper which is a sort of camera equipped in the center of house to monitor pet or activate alarm if thief come in. Recently, all of the devices are being connected to each other and share data to automatically control the devices or let user know that something happen resulting in the user take an proper action. We can call the trend as IoT. It is impossible for us to anticipate what extent it can be expended to.

Hello James!   I\'m glad to check your homework again. Let\'s focus on parallelism. The balance between two or more similar words, phrases or clauses is called parallelism. Parallelism is also called parallel structure or parallel construction. Parallel construction prevents awkwardness, promotes clarity and improves writing style and readability. The first sentence below contains parallel structures; the second does not.   The Writing Center needs Consultants who are ambitious, who are self-motivated, and who are dedicated.The Writing Center needs Consultants who are ambitious, motivate themselves, and exhibit dedication.   Teacher Venus^^   Do you know Internet of Things (IoT) house keeper? >>>CORRECTDuring last class, I mentioned IoT house keeper which is a sort of camera equipped in the center of house to monitor pet or activate alarm if thief come in. >>>During our last class, I mentioned IoT house keeper which is a sort of camera equipped in the center of the house to monitor pets. The alarm is activated if a thief comes in. Recently, all of the devices are being connected to each other and share data to automatically control the devices or let user know that something happen resulting in the user take an proper action. >>>Recently, all of the devices are connected to each other and the data is shared automatically to control the devices or let the user know that something will happen resulting in the user taking a proper action.   We can call the trend as IoT. >>>CORRECT It is impossible for us to anticipate what extent it can be expended to. >>>It is impossible for us to anticipate to what extent it can be expended to.