May!

It was May 1st today. Looking back my past months in this year, I was very busy. In May, there are several funny days such as a college festival, holidays, and special events. I’m really expecting my college festival. In the festival, we can sing a song, drink alcohol and dance with friends in the campus. The most anxious event is taking a graduation picture. I already reserved the beauty studio in order to trim my hair and make my face up. I will go there in early morning on the day of taking graduation picture. Also, I already bought a dress which I will wear on the day Nowadays, the weather is really good although yellow dust is coming from China. I’d like to go picnic with my boyfriend after my mid-term exam. It will end on Tuesday.

Hi [이름]! I hope that you will enjoy your college festival and also I hope that you and your boyfriend will be able to have your picnic despite of the weather. I know that you will have a great time. Thank you for sharing the interesting events that happen in your college and in Korea. See you in class. T.Faye   Here are some of your corrections: It was May 1st today. >>It is May 1st today.Looking back my past months in this year, I was very busy. >>Looking back the past few months, I was very busy. >>I was busy the past few months.In May, there are several funny days such as a college festival, holidays, and special events.>>Correct!I’m really expecting my college festival. >>Correct! >> I'm really excited for my college festival.In the festival, we can sing a song, drink alcohol and dance with friends in the campus. >>Correct!The most anxious event is taking a graduation picture. >>Correct!I already reserved the beauty studio in order to trim my hair and make my face up. >> I already reserved the beauty studio in order to trim my hair and to put make up on my face.I will go there in early morning on the day of taking graduation picture. >>I will go there early in the morning on the day of the picture taking.Also, I already bought a dress which I will wear on the day>> Also, I already bought a dress which I will wear on that day.Nowadays, the weather is really good although yellow dust is coming from China. >>Correct!I’d like to go picnic with my boyfriend after my mid-term exam. >>I'd like to go out with my boyfriend and have a picnic after my midterm exams.It will end on Tuesday. >>Correct!