May 6th\'s homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
In my room, there are two built-in cabinets.
>> CORRECT
OR >> There are two built-in cabinets in my room.
On the other side there is a bed.
>> On the other side, there is a bed.
There is a table in between and that is where i sit when i calling English class.
>> There is a table in between the bed. That is where I sit when I have my English class.
There is a big window facing each other.
>> There are two big windows facing each other.
Next to the door, there is a dressing table.
>> Next to the door is a dressing a table.
On the floor, there is a fan because the wheather is going hot.
>> On the floor, there is a fan because the weather is getting hot.
On the bed, there\'re many dolls.
>> On the bed, there are many dolls.
Most of them was my favorite character, but i don\'t like them than before.
>> Most of them were my favorite characters but i don’t like them anymore.
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