MAY

2018-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

I like may because it's warm and cool. We can see beautiful flowers in this seasons. Especially, there is a few holidays. Yeah!! I read article avout durian. I like this fruit. The tase is great and texture of fodd is good. It is like to ice-cream. The smell is okay to me. Truly, I remember that, I'd like to have it again. I expect today's class. See you soon.

강사 첨삭

This is interesting, Ms. [Name]!

I\'m looking forward to discuss this article with you. I personally don\'t like the fruit because of the pungent odor of it. ha! ha! ha! See you!


~Teacher Eunice


I like may because it\'s warm and cool.

>>> I like the month of May because it\'s warm and cool.

>>> OR: I like the month of May because the temperature is warm and cool.

We can see beautiful flowers in this seasons.

>>> We can see beautiful flowers in this season.  

Especially, there is a few holidays. 

>>> Especially, there are few holidays in this month. 

Yeah!! I read article avout durian.

>>> Yes, I read the article about durian.

I like this fruit.

>>> Correct!

The tase is great and texture of fodd is good.

>>> The taste is great and the texture of the fruit is good too.

>>> OR: The taste and the texture of this fruit is great.

It is like to ice-cream.

>>> It is like an ice-cream.  

The smell is okay to me.

>>> The smell of this fruit is okay for me.

>>> OR: The scent of durian is fine for me.  

Truly, I remember that, I\'d like to have it again.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: Truly, I remember that fruit and I\'d like to have it again.

I expect today\'s class.

>>> I am expecting today\'s class.  

See you soon.

>>> Correct!

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