MAY
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
This is interesting, Ms. [Name]!
I\'m looking forward to discuss this article with you. I personally don\'t like the fruit because of the pungent odor of it. ha! ha! ha! See you!
~Teacher Eunice
I like may because it\'s warm and cool.
>>> I like the month of May because it\'s warm and cool.
>>> OR: I like the month of May because the temperature is warm and cool.
We can see beautiful flowers in this seasons.
>>> We can see beautiful flowers in this season.
Especially, there is a few holidays.
>>> Especially, there are few holidays in this month.
Yeah!! I read article avout durian.
>>> Yes, I read the article about durian.
I like this fruit.
>>> Correct!
The tase is great and texture of fodd is good.
>>> The taste is great and the texture of the fruit is good too.
>>> OR: The taste and the texture of this fruit is great.
It is like to ice-cream.
>>> It is like an ice-cream.
The smell is okay to me.
>>> The smell of this fruit is okay for me.
>>> OR: The scent of durian is fine for me.
Truly, I remember that, I\'d like to have it again.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: Truly, I remember that fruit and I\'d like to have it again.
I expect today\'s class.
>>> I am expecting today\'s class.
See you soon.
>>> Correct!
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